Monday, 4 July 2011

brother at war

my brother i swear love have swept you away..
away from the light of reality to the darkness in disguise
brother of mine who i speak so high of..i take off my hat every time i say your name..
I'm afraid but love has knocked your knee caps off..
the way you recite her steps the..
the way typical love poison murder mans ego..
the way you hang around her waist and sway to her motion..
who are you to question the pleasure of love..
my elder musculent respected brother..
who are you now weaken by love forces..
a battlefield tale of fortunes
cry not with your blistered heart
but peel thy love to success

1 comment:

  1. This is a very good poem . I like it


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