Friday, 16 September 2011

surface of love

This poem was written by Thabang Mphahlele.17 year old young poet i love this piece,
how he explains his love as a lake covered in leafs great work dude bigup!! 

The lake is half hidden by leafs
Just like my love for you
Although i know its alive
to your view it doesn't exist

To many shades of leafs
are like the way i sometimes feel
My moods in love i vined
as colours are dynamic
Leafs are very real

The water of the lake is deep dark
and almost still
I can never speak of our love like that
Not now
Not yet
But surely someday


  1. awesome he thinks he knows wats love... Congrats he might be a gr8 interpriter


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